- The start to your project is really inspiring. The layout confused me at first but it works well and I really like how you are comparing your own housing background to the location.
- Keep up the good work!
- Very well informed on the location and interesting research. I would look at one aspect of the area to focus on
- The start of your project is very interesting, the photographs you have taken are very aesthetically appealing. Maybe do some more research on location artists and their images.
- Great second hand research, need more first hand referencing
- If you look more in depth into the images you have researched this will really give you ideas of things to use from other artists within your own work.
- Good start, maybe many of us got similar addresses so don't worry; try to find some history (even 40-60 years back) and compare with now, or street photography, documentary, even minimal (textures, objects on the street)
- I think you need to do more research on the history of your location. There is a lot of information on your blog, but it is a little bit confusing, still do not understand why you were thinking about your home and what the idea is.
- Great effort. Nice research and beautiful photos. Well explained and well presented. Nothing to add, well done.
- Looking at your location you are near Hulme. The photographer that did iconic pictures of the housing there is worth looking at and transferring the images to your work?
Although I was really nervous about the group crit I'm really glad it happened, it's really helpful to get everyone's opinion and it'll help my project grow into something (hopefully) really good. The feedback I got was pretty good, and I hope that I can sort out any problems that I have.
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